Tuesday, September 18, 2007

The Real Geneva Tisdale

The amazing differences in the written word and the spoken word are never more apparent than in the story of Geneva Tisdale. Reading the text of the story lends a historical, impartial view of the happenings of that time. One can get an overall view of the layout of the restaurant and how hard the employees worked. But once Geneva begins to speak does the true story emerge.

To read the script, one would think the story was about the civil rights battles that were going on all over the south at that time. It was a fierce and frightening time in the history of our country during which many people were hurt and killed.
Civil rights leaders such as Martin King and Malcolm X were murdered outright as people were afraid of their charismatic leadership.

The real story here is in the wistfulness of Geneva’s voice as she tells her story. One hears the pride as she recounts being the first African American to be served at the counter. One can almost hear the anger as she focuses only on her work and ignores the demeaning work of waiting on Caucasians for years, always the servant but never the served, until the moment arrives. One can hear the yearning to be on the customer side of the counter on her own terms and not guided by her boss’s dictates. And after all that she has lived through for so many years, to be making such a low wage with the knowledge that the Caucasian waitress would make more money.

If I were in control of the telling of this tale, I would create a one-woman show in which I would have a woman of color deliver a monologue, speaking of all of the internal conversations that she would have with herself during this time. I would want to know what she was REALLY thinking behind that counter, but would be in too much deep trouble to voice. I would want to hear the longing, the anger and betrayal that was too dangerous to be expressed in a more open way. I might even have her spit in a hamburger before she would serve it to the man who called her racist names.

Yes, Geneva Tisdale is a remarkable woman whose real story is in her feelings and thoughts of a time that discounted her humanity, a story that can be more aptly portrayed through a spoken history rather than a written one.

5 Comments:

At September 19, 2007 at 5:14 PM , Blogger kylboy06 said...

I agree that Geneva's story is one that should be heard, rather than read. It is more personal hearing the story from someone who experienced it first hand.

 
At September 20, 2007 at 3:28 AM , Blogger Susan said...

Listening to Ms. Tisdale's story brings depth to her story more so then reading the transcripts. Her side of the story during the civil rights movement can help listeners believe in her content by hearing her voice.

 
At September 20, 2007 at 7:20 AM , Blogger Unknown said...

Good usage with comparison by putting Martin Luther King Jr, and Malcolm X. You explained a lot of detail, which is a good thing considering the transcript wasn't as good as it could've been. Great job.

 
At September 20, 2007 at 3:51 PM , Blogger Ben_Stein_07 said...

I like the usage of comparisons and the outside history you brought into this assignment. I agree with you about how to rewrite the story. What was she really thinking? What were Genevas thoughts about the man or woman who she served as they sat and ate at the counter she could only work at.

 
At September 25, 2007 at 9:23 AM , Blogger tara said...

I really liked the way you describe the difference in the two stories, Marsha. You made a good point about the two versions telling a different story with a different point.

 

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